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cms:sus-11-016 [03/10/2012 11:56]
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cms:sus-11-016 [03/10/2012 12:21]
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 Abstract: ​ Abstract: ​
 1. "up to 4.98 fb-1": we would suggest to write the actual range instead of "up to" (throughout the paper) 1. "up to 4.98 fb-1": we would suggest to write the actual range instead of "up to" (throughout the paper)
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 2. "range of mass parameters"​ : which mass ? 2. "range of mass parameters"​ : which mass ?
  
  
 L1-L6: the word "​particle"​ is repeated 3 times in two lines L1-L6: the word "​particle"​ is repeated 3 times in two lines
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 L5: "one theoretical model ..." This is coming out of the blue, we should at least say (in one sentence) why this particular one is used in most CMS analyses. L5: "one theoretical model ..." This is coming out of the blue, we should at least say (in one sentence) why this particular one is used in most CMS analyses.
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 L5 : "in most CMS analyses " -> In most of the analyses performed by the CMS collaboration (or similar rephrasing) L5 : "in most CMS analyses " -> In most of the analyses performed by the CMS collaboration (or similar rephrasing)
  
-L7 : principal -> principle (or at least, this seems to be the intended meaning)+L7 : principal -> principle (or at least, this seems to be the intended meaning) ​or remove the word and commas.
  
 L7/9 : repetition of the word "​particle"​ L7/9 : repetition of the word "​particle"​
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 L.214: remove "The limits are thus subject to statistical fluctuations" ​ (as everything...) L.214: remove "The limits are thus subject to statistical fluctuations" ​ (as everything...)
  
-Fig.1  ​In the top header of each plot: Why m(~q)>>​m(~g) and not the opposite? +Fig.1  caption "​chargino"​ -> "​neutralino"​
-caption "​chargino"​ -> "​neutralino"​+
  
 I have also two conceptual questions about these plots: I have also two conceptual questions about these plots: