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| 1. "up to 4.98 fb-1": we would suggest to write the actual range instead of "up to" (throughout the paper) | 1. "up to 4.98 fb-1": we would suggest to write the actual range instead of "up to" (throughout the paper) | ||
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| 2. "range of mass parameters" : which mass ? | 2. "range of mass parameters" : which mass ? | ||
| L1-L6: the word "particle" is repeated 3 times in two lines | L1-L6: the word "particle" is repeated 3 times in two lines | ||
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| L5: "one theoretical model ..." This is coming out of the blue, we should at least say (in one sentence) why this particular one is used in most CMS analyses. | L5: "one theoretical model ..." This is coming out of the blue, we should at least say (in one sentence) why this particular one is used in most CMS analyses. | ||
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| L5 : "in most CMS analyses " -> In most of the analyses performed by the CMS collaboration (or similar rephrasing) | L5 : "in most CMS analyses " -> In most of the analyses performed by the CMS collaboration (or similar rephrasing) | ||
| - | L7 : principal -> principle (or at least, this seems to be the intended meaning) | + | L7 : principal -> principle (or at least, this seems to be the intended meaning) or remove the word and commas. |
| L7/9 : repetition of the word "particle" | L7/9 : repetition of the word "particle" | ||