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 http://cms.cern.ch/cds/EXO-12-002
+Roberta
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+Commenti generali: pur essendo abbastanza in accordo con la linea di quelli gia' espressi da voi, io eviterei di proporgli la riscrittura del paper secondo una nuova logica di presentazione. Chiederei loro di aggiungere delle frasi "cappello" che aiutino il lettore a seguire le fasi descrittive dell'articolo.
+Abstract:
+Please rewrite first sentence -> too long.Make shorter one(s)
+Last sentence: remove "The stringents "
+l9: remove "for current integrated luminosity"
+l12: Results obtained -> The obtained results
+l28: pair pair...remove one
+l35: to two taus and two b jets, using pp collisions * at sqrt(7) = 7 TeV, is presented.  The data have been collected by the CMS experiment and correspond to an integrated luminosity of 4.8 fb-1.
+l38: These requirements result in two possible final states...
+l47:  in the l tau_h b bbar final state, assuming beta = 1,...
+l48:production in the  l tau_h b bbar final state
+l55 : *a* calorimetry system
+l58: has extensive forward ...-> ?? does not mean much... either you specify better or remove the adjective
+l61: were collected ...-> are collected using triggers requiring (remove "a set of")
+l88: the INVARIANT mass of ..
+l91: the the ...
+l90-92: are you missing a verb?? not understandable
+l94: from SM processes ARE ...
+l95-96: There ARE also small CONTRIBUTIONS from ...
+l100: 200 to 800 GeV.. MADGRAPH generator...  hadronization and showering, has been used to model...
+l114-120: are you talking about single top bkg? Remove first sentence. Add *single* in line 115
+Sulle figure: stessi commenti identici di Nicolo!
 Stefano C.