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+ | Overall I think it's a well written paper, polished and wee structured. | ||
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+ | Roberta | ||
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+ | L3: i would remove "however" | ||
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+ | L16: No sure about the correction | ||
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+ | L37: not so nice to see transverse momentum " Et " | ||
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+ | L44: MAGNETIC field volume | ||
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+ | L124: isolated leptons that CONSTITUTE ANOTHER source of background WITH SIMILAR CHARACTERISTICS TO WZ and ...( remove "for searches ...") | ||
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+ | L137: ***non sono daccordo col vostro commento sul conversion factor | ||
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+ | L174: the leptons in THE final STATE | ||
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+ | L178: trigger SELECTIONS, PHYSICS OBJECTS reconstruction, and | ||
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+ | Tab 2 ,3 : remove % everywhere as it is already in the column label | ||
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+ | L214: hereafter BR refers to BRANCHING RATIO FOR final states WHICH INCLUDE electrons... | ||
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+ | Nicolo | ||
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+ | L3: not sure it's correct: a very week coupling to the Higgs, i.e., if they neutrinos get their mass as the other fermions in the SM, should be considered "SM ", even if esthetically we don't like it. | ||
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+ | L76: thereby defined ==> thereby defining a | ||
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+ | L90: lepton => muon | ||
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+ | L95: where does the Ht< 100 GeV cut comes from? | ||
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+ | Figure2: don't we need CMS 2011... on the pictures? | ||
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+ | L180-181: how do we get 99+-1 from an efficiency between 92 and 100 %? | ||
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+ | Table3: 7.5% ==> 7% (use the same number of precision digit as the other numbers. | ||
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+ | Figures 3,4,5 : Eliminate "preliminary" | ||
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+ | L245: They are ==> The results are ... | ||
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