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cms:cms-exo-12-025 [11/04/2014 23:56]
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cms:cms-exo-12-025 [11/04/2014 23:58] (versione attuale)
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 L 246: "same analysis phase space" -> "same phase space of the analysis"​ ? L 246: "same analysis phase space" -> "same phase space of the analysis"​ ?
  
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 L115: instead of quotes I prefer italic style, as quotes in general give the impression it is not a precise word, while here is more an alias, so better to use the italic. L115: instead of quotes I prefer italic style, as quotes in general give the impression it is not a precise word, while here is more an alias, so better to use the italic.
  
-L122: "[...] tracker muon [36]." --> "[...] tracker muon. A more detailed description of the muon identification algorithm can be found elsewhere [36]." +L122: "[...] tracker muon [36]." --> "[...] tracker muon. A more detailed description of the muon identification algorithm can be found elsewhere [36]." OR rearrange such a way that ref 36 will refer to the muon id in general and not only to the tracker muons only.
-     OR rearrange such a way that ref 36 will refer to the muon id in general and not only to the tracker muons only.+
  
 L127-L129: Why you apply a correction if it is compatible with unity? L127-L129: Why you apply a correction if it is compatible with unity?
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 L159: pileup --> pile-up L159: pileup --> pile-up
  
-L159-L161: "One of the leptons is allowed to be a tracker muon instead of a global muon and the requirement on the number of muon chamber hits is removed"​ +L159-L161: ​ 
-    --> +"One of the leptons is allowed to be a tracker muon instead of a global muon and the requirement on the number of muon chamber hits is removed"​ --> "One of the muon is allowed to be a tracker muon only and the requirement on the number of muon chamber hits is removed."​
-    "One of the muon is allowed to be a tracker muon only and the requirement on the number of muon chamber hits is removed."​+
  
 L161-L162: not clear if the lepton removal is only for the muons from Z or for all muons. If it is only for muons from Z, then why? If it is for all muons, then the sentence, in that position, make that not clear (in this latter case you should move this sentence after pile-up in L159). L161-L162: not clear if the lepton removal is only for the muons from Z or for all muons. If it is only for muons from Z, then why? If it is for all muons, then the sentence, in that position, make that not clear (in this latter case you should move this sentence after pile-up in L159).